Just find this treasure so I'm lucky to read it to the latest update and ended up loving it. Love everything about this vn hope the next update show up next month cause I can't wait to know if calbex will ask the MC on the weird feeling his feeling while fighting and why his leaking.😂 Can't wait for build 6.
Surprised noone in a million years thought of easing the pain with pleasure,if that were the case ,they should've just added vibrators inside the suit for emergency pain overload
Ohh that's great, thank you for answering me! I only asked cause a lot of times creators put the characters in the top or bottom category being MC the only who is Vers depending of the ROs preferences, so I was wondering if for example MC would be always bottom with Brut and top with other character or if he would be Vers with every character hahaha
Ohh that's great, thank you for answering me! I only asked cause a lot of times creators put the characters in the top or bottom category being MC the only who is Vers depending of the ROs preferences, so I was wondering if for example MC would be always bottom with Brut and top with other character or if he would be Vers with every character hahaha
Absolutely love all of it. The story, the assets, the characters, EVERYTHING. Super great work on the dev-side of things.
I do kinda feel a teeny weeny bit disappointed; was hoping for a wee bit more considering the time it took... But I am 110% happy with what we got and super excited for everything that comes next!!!
SPOILER
Did Calbex or Fen actually 'feel' their Squires' ...interaction? Surely Fen didn't, considering Brut almost went into shock from his pain, but wouldn't we have felt Calbex's embarrassment or something?
I loved the new chapter and assets. Tho I just CAN’T wait for a conversation between Calbex and Corwan about their… eghem… unorthodox methods of keeping fellow Squires alive ^^’
Well the Aegis works both ways, so I'm sure he has some idea, and Fen too. Since this was so successful, I can eventually see it being intergrated into Page training. Even if it becomes a "What happens in the trenches, stays in the trenches" kind of thing, keeping a fellow Squire (and thereby their Knight) alive through that kind of pain must be added to the training.
Humanity's contribution to the war and saving lives (Make love, not war).
Hey dev team just ignore att this hate and criticism some of these people put. Just have fun and create the story yall want to create. Im loving the story and all the art. Just keep having fun. You got my support.
Buddy, body positivity is not embracing your “inner fatass”…
it’s about accepting your dysfunctions like for example: losing a leg in a car accident, or being born without a nose… or losing an eye (and much more) in a war (looking at you Calbex).
Correct me if I’m wrong
Edit: it’s literally in the second CG on that page…
Reading the synopsis and the comment under mine just pushed me to get this. Saw the name of this as a suggestion in a random Keith Ballard vid and thought I'd look it up. Glad I did, kinda excited, hope this holds up. That said, still gotta catch up on some others before reading this.
I abs love this story and how it plays out, i await new updates in the future and i love your work, everything from the artstyle to the environments, music and everything is very well done. I love the work.
I do want more content of Jeaz and Cyrox tho plz plz 🙏🙏 (And caldex ofc ofc)
The actions scenes are always super well done, which is impressive, because other than horror, I personally find that action is the most difficult genre to write well, so I really must applaud the effort xou've put into making these scenes coherent and absolutely enjoyable 😌
Everything about IFS is top notch. Backgrounds, sprites, music, writing, pacing, world building, everything! 😁 I'm totally hooked and can't wait to see where xou guys take this compelling tale!
It doesn't happen often, but when there is such an amazing female character like Xaria despite all the characters being good. She is easily my favorite
This story has me so hooked right now and i love all the characters, I kinda hate how attracted I am to Brut... and Eryx must be protected at all costs (who im also severely attracted to)
Loving the vn so far, i like the setting and story building, and a very solid mix of characters. Also Eryx is too pure and I must protect him from harm!
I'm glad the story still continues, even though I'm late to the party. and even though calbex lashed out, if anything I just felt sad, rather than upset about the sudden whiplash. I just want to comfort him, but you can't comfort someone without knowing whats wrong first. so gonna be chilling and waiting for that to come along at some point. oh yea, Merry Christmas.
A pretty enjoyable YA fiction if that's your sort of thing. Art, worldbuilding, writing and character dynamic are all pretty well done.
My two biggest issues with this vn are:
1. Sex scene isn’t the best way to begin your story. It may lead your protagonist to be perceived as a horny nymphomaniac who’s main goal is getting laid, and while I know that’s the reason why a lot of people read fvn’s in the first place, it never the less can create a negative first impression, so that’s probably something you should not disclose about protagonist’s character for quite while.
2. I don’t like Calbex. As far as I understand knight’s duty aside from fighting is to be a good mentor to their squire yet Calbex has been neglecting both of these duties just because he is on recovery… apparently. Corwan works is ass off to become a knight yet Calbex simply doesn’t care about him or how well he becomes one, leaving his mentorhip to everyone else. He doesn't provide any mentorship, any guidance on what’s knight job is, doesn’t take any effort to encourage or discourage his passions… hell, he doesn’t provide much of an attention to hm really. I guess it’s for setting up his character arc but, like, doesn’t even higher ups demand of him to provide at least some sort of mentorship while he is recovering from injury? How is he still not in a retirement and out of the job? At this point I won’t mind if Corwan would be assigned even to Fen. Like sure, he is an ass, but at least he cares about rising good squires. Calbex, on the other hand just doesn’t.
To 1: Sex Scene can the the right way to begin a story. In some Sci-Fi Universe like Battletech and even Star Ship Trooper, Sex is a casual Thing between comrade. With the always looming thread on the horizon (plague) and focus on military and war - life is short and cheap. So the characters in this universe enjoy while they can.
To 2: When i look on the first day you are entirely correct. After the first dinner on day one between the two, the day basicly ends with just a deal. This can be easily fixed with some extra narration. However your asssements. However its a crucial mistake by both parties not just Calbex. On day two, Calbex provide moral support. After that he is cut off by the MCs tamper tantrum. Thats my only issus with the story: Dispite all the MCs dissapponitment by the bombshell Calbex dropped at him, you dont throw a fit at your Knight! And when Calbex called after him: "MC, wait!" the MC didnt listen. If Fen would have been the Knight, the MC would have been punished for disobyeing a direct order. The MC himself admits he acts like a child.
Fixing:
Day 1 evening can be easily /lazily fixed if Calbex just give the MC some Files or workout routine to learn. Can be done in just a few sentences...
Day2 + 3: The Outburst by both MC and Calbex seems to be a vital part of the story and their behaviour. A little bit more dialog my help, and not the "get angry and go to bed with bad mood - refuse to eloborate" - approach.
> With the always looming thread on the horizon (plague) and focus on military and war - life is short and cheap.
This explanation still doesn’t sit right with me. Unlike Battletech, IFS’s version of future doesn’t appear to be dystopian to resort to that sort of mentality, and while the plague is definitely a problem, it isn’t crashing moon from Majora’s Mask that is going to wipe everything out inevitably. It doesn’t help the fact that it was entirely MC’s choice to resort to military out of personal vendetta, so there is no real excuse for him to be a promiscuous slut.
And it isn’t like game adresses it as n tasteful way either. On the contrary it endorses such behavior which kinda insulting, honestly. According to it its okay to be a promiscuous slut, which is further reinforces harmful stereotypes for gay community. It either has to adress this sort of thing or left it offscreen entirely, cuz as it stands now, it just not a good look.
(On the other hand your second argument is on point and I fully agree with it)
And it isn’t like game adresses it as n tasteful way either. On the contrary it endorses such behavior which kinda insulting, honestly. According to it its okay to be a promiscuous slut, which is further reinforces harmful stereotypes for gay community. It either has to adress this sort of thing or left it offscreen entirely, cuz as it stands now, it just not a good look.
Would you kindly provide an example, pls.
For me the MC is just an 18-20 years old, who is barely out of puberty, who got surrounded by buff military furry guys, that fit exactly his liking. Of course he can barely keep his thoughts out of his gutter. Nothing to be ashemd of.
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Just find this treasure so I'm lucky to read it to the latest update and ended up loving it. Love everything about this vn hope the next update show up next month cause I can't wait to know if calbex will ask the MC on the weird feeling his feeling while fighting and why his leaking.😂 Can't wait for build 6.
have to say, a certain scene is erotic, but I just cant stop laughing watching it, especially the reaction of the wolf after they come back:D
i laughed so hard i had needed to go to the hospital (i have IBS & my stomach was hurting that much)
even when I tried to play it again now, I have a hard time continuing the vn
🗿brother lost to gay furry sex scenes
so wait, does HE receive second hand stimulation? Was bro moaning into the comms mid fight?
also W update
Surprised noone in a million years thought of easing the pain with pleasure,if that were the case ,they should've just added vibrators inside the suit for emergency pain overload
love this VN so much keep up the incredible work <3
ik damn well fen felt all of that
Does anybody have the feeling that Fen and Brut might be related? Cause for some reason that is what I am getting as I am reading this.
Ahhhh I love it!!!! The characters, the background, even MC! (And I usually don't like the protagonist a lot xD)
The only thing, I really, really hope is that MC is not going to be bottom every single time, I'm so tired of bottom!MC
I wanted to see MC topping Brut sigh
Real
I did open the VN with the MC topping to show that he most certainly will not be bottoming on every occasion. There will be a healthy mix.
Ohh that's great, thank you for answering me! I only asked cause a lot of times creators put the characters in the top or bottom category being MC the only who is Vers depending of the ROs preferences, so I was wondering if for example MC would be always bottom with Brut and top with other character or if he would be Vers with every character hahaha
Ohh that's great, thank you for answering me! I only asked cause a lot of times creators put the characters in the top or bottom category being MC the only who is Vers depending of the ROs preferences, so I was wondering if for example MC would be always bottom with Brut and top with other character or if he would be Vers with every character hahaha
THANK YOU for providing some actual variety! It gets so boring and old with how many MC's bottom! Some Vers Representation!
Unfortunately some of us have goldfish memory
I am ecstatic on knowing what will happen to the "Fen talk" with Brut 😩 (hoping for a ending with Brut too)
O-Oh...Oh my~......I mean... *ahem*...So build 5 huh?
Absolutely love all of it. The story, the assets, the characters, EVERYTHING. Super great work on the dev-side of things.
I do kinda feel a teeny weeny bit disappointed; was hoping for a wee bit more considering the time it took... But I am 110% happy with what we got and super excited for everything that comes next!!!
SPOILER
Did Calbex or Fen actually 'feel' their Squires' ...interaction? Surely Fen didn't, considering Brut almost went into shock from his pain, but wouldn't we have felt Calbex's embarrassment or something?
I am pretty sure Fen and Calbex felt that.😭
Yeah i remembered the "we share emotions" thing,
And then the "fen wants to talk to you" part.. xD
The excuses must be wild
I did forget calbex is also connected..
Is there some place other than the VN that we can find the music?
I did NOT expect the mc to do that but still the animation and story is great!
"I don't even like you."
*proceeds anyway 🤣🤣🤣
This just proves that Brut has a soft spot for him 🤐🤐
Seemed pretty hard based on what went down. :P
I loved the new chapter and assets. Tho I just CAN’T wait for a conversation between Calbex and Corwan about their… eghem… unorthodox methods of keeping fellow Squires alive ^^’
Well the Aegis works both ways, so I'm sure he has some idea, and Fen too. Since this was so successful, I can eventually see it being intergrated into Page training. Even if it becomes a "What happens in the trenches, stays in the trenches" kind of thing, keeping a fellow Squire (and thereby their Knight) alive through that kind of pain must be added to the training.
Humanity's contribution to the war and saving lives (Make love, not war).
Frs.. "Make love not war" is the Key 😖
new chapter EHEHJKKHJELKHLJKHLJKLJHALKHJ im so eheheheheheheheeee
holyshitthenewchapterwoaaa
Yes more Brute and Calbex 👍
Am I naive for thinking Build 5 would be out today? XD
Any day now tho... Omg I'm so excited!!!
Im thinking the same 😭 but im also excited for the new build!
Hey dev team just ignore att this hate and criticism some of these people put. Just have fun and create the story yall want to create. Im loving the story and all the art. Just keep having fun. You got my support.
Making “body positivity “ as one of your theme in a place where physical fitness is an absolute necessity is beyond stupid in particular
Alt right brainrot.
Buddy, body positivity is not embracing your “inner fatass”… it’s about accepting your dysfunctions like for example: losing a leg in a car accident, or being born without a nose… or losing an eye (and much more) in a war (looking at you Calbex).
Correct me if I’m wrong
Edit: it’s literally in the second CG on that page…
I said something similar but I don't see it, not sure if authors can delete comments on this site
Hey, how old is Calbex and Fen? Who is older, I am curious about this.
Warning: Gatria system under threat from Terminid incursion, requesting additional helldivers
great game
Reading the synopsis and the comment under mine just pushed me to get this. Saw the name of this as a suggestion in a random Keith Ballard vid and thought I'd look it up. Glad I did, kinda excited, hope this holds up. That said, still gotta catch up on some others before reading this.
So is each build a chapter? I'm assuming so since there are four chapters and the last build that was released was build four.
indeed yes. We have not split any chapters yet
The game so far is amazing, can't wait for the next update
Really enjoy the game so far; can't wait for the next update. That cliffhanger killed me
Here we go!!!!!!
I mean, Brut and Calbex is fine, minus Brut being a total ass at first.
The story is quite good, but I have to admit the emotional breakdowns are a bit over embedded.
Anyways, it's a good start and I definitely want to see more on the upcoming updates.
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I abs love this story and how it plays out, i await new updates in the future and i love your work, everything from the artstyle to the environments, music and everything is very well done. I love the work.
I do want more content of Jeaz and Cyrox tho plz plz 🙏🙏 (And caldex ofc ofc)
NOOOOOOO!! it can't just end like that!?! that's so meaaaan! what a dirty cliffhanger 😭😭
ugh this story is too good send help
The actions scenes are always super well done, which is impressive, because other than horror, I personally find that action is the most difficult genre to write well, so I really must applaud the effort xou've put into making these scenes coherent and absolutely enjoyable 😌
Everything about IFS is top notch. Backgrounds, sprites, music, writing, pacing, world building, everything! 😁 I'm totally hooked and can't wait to see where xou guys take this compelling tale!
It doesn't happen often, but when there is such an amazing female character like Xaria despite all the characters being good. She is easily my favorite
This story has me so hooked right now and i love all the characters, I kinda hate how attracted I am to Brut... and Eryx must be protected at all costs (who im also severely attracted to)
the art in this game is fire!
Loving the vn so far, i like the setting and story building, and a very solid mix of characters. Also Eryx is too pure and I must protect him from harm!
I'm glad the story still continues, even though I'm late to the party. and even though calbex lashed out, if anything I just felt sad, rather than upset about the sudden whiplash. I just want to comfort him, but you can't comfort someone without knowing whats wrong first. so gonna be chilling and waiting for that to come along at some point. oh yea, Merry Christmas.
A pretty enjoyable YA fiction if that's your sort of thing. Art, worldbuilding, writing and character dynamic are all pretty well done.
My two biggest issues with this vn are:
1. Sex scene isn’t the best way to begin your story. It may lead your protagonist to be perceived as a horny nymphomaniac who’s main goal is getting laid, and while I know that’s the reason why a lot of people read fvn’s in the first place, it never the less can create a negative first impression, so that’s probably something you should not disclose about protagonist’s character for quite while.
2. I don’t like Calbex. As far as I understand knight’s duty aside from fighting is to be a good mentor to their squire yet Calbex has been neglecting both of these duties just because he is on recovery… apparently. Corwan works is ass off to become a knight yet Calbex simply doesn’t care about him or how well he becomes one, leaving his mentorhip to everyone else. He doesn't provide any mentorship, any guidance on what’s knight job is, doesn’t take any effort to encourage or discourage his passions… hell, he doesn’t provide much of an attention to hm really. I guess it’s for setting up his character arc but, like, doesn’t even higher ups demand of him to provide at least some sort of mentorship while he is recovering from injury? How is he still not in a retirement and out of the job? At this point I won’t mind if Corwan would be assigned even to Fen. Like sure, he is an ass, but at least he cares about rising good squires. Calbex, on the other hand just doesn’t.
To 1: Sex Scene can the the right way to begin a story. In some Sci-Fi Universe like Battletech and even Star Ship Trooper, Sex is a casual Thing between comrade. With the always looming thread on the horizon (plague) and focus on military and war - life is short and cheap. So the characters in this universe enjoy while they can.
To 2: When i look on the first day you are entirely correct. After the first dinner on day one between the two, the day basicly ends with just a deal. This can be easily fixed with some extra narration. However your asssements. However its a crucial mistake by both parties not just Calbex. On day two, Calbex provide moral support. After that he is cut off by the MCs tamper tantrum. Thats my only issus with the story: Dispite all the MCs dissapponitment by the bombshell Calbex dropped at him, you dont throw a fit at your Knight! And when Calbex called after him: "MC, wait!" the MC didnt listen. If Fen would have been the Knight, the MC would have been punished for disobyeing a direct order. The MC himself admits he acts like a child.
Fixing:
Day 1 evening can be easily /lazily fixed if Calbex just give the MC some Files or workout routine to learn. Can be done in just a few sentences...
Day2 + 3: The Outburst by both MC and Calbex seems to be a vital part of the story and their behaviour. A little bit more dialog my help, and not the "get angry and go to bed with bad mood - refuse to eloborate" - approach.
> With the always looming thread on the horizon (plague) and focus on military and war - life is short and cheap.
This explanation still doesn’t sit right with me. Unlike Battletech, IFS’s version of future doesn’t appear to be dystopian to resort to that sort of mentality, and while the plague is definitely a problem, it isn’t crashing moon from Majora’s Mask that is going to wipe everything out inevitably. It doesn’t help the fact that it was entirely MC’s choice to resort to military out of personal vendetta, so there is no real excuse for him to be a promiscuous slut.
And it isn’t like game adresses it as n tasteful way either. On the contrary it endorses such behavior which kinda insulting, honestly. According to it its okay to be a promiscuous slut, which is further reinforces harmful stereotypes for gay community. It either has to adress this sort of thing or left it offscreen entirely, cuz as it stands now, it just not a good look.
(On the other hand your second argument is on point and I fully agree with it)
Would you kindly provide an example, pls.
For me the MC is just an 18-20 years old, who is barely out of puberty, who got surrounded by buff military furry guys, that fit exactly his liking. Of course he can barely keep his thoughts out of his gutter. Nothing to be ashemd of.
You clearly weren't much around the military
My dad was, and as much as he liked to talk about it not once he was mentioning the fact he and his boys fucked with each other in an orgy sessions.
And even if they were it doesn’t mean that a fictional story should present it as tasteless as it does.