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Ok so im a bit confused (idk if its my bad memory) because just before we get deployed to fight off the uhh aliens (forgot the name, i havent read it yet and i JUST started reading the new update) someone states that you gotta stay calm as you and calbex share a link or something?
What made me curios about this is when we do the deed with brut does that mean that Calbex felt some arousal when figthign or something?

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I LOVEEEE THIS FVN SOOO MUCHHH. It’s honestly hard to find furry visual novels that hit the spot, this is a rare gem. The plot is unique and well written, the art style is just perfection, and the different designs of the characters and their personalities are just ARGHHH. You can really get attached to these characters, The music is also fucking great, especially that nightclub part. TikTok got me here, but now I’m completely OBSESSED.

Everything just clicks. I never felt bored reading the dialogue, which is saying a lot because some VNs can drag, but this one kept me engaged the whole time. The pacing feels just right, and it really makes you care about what’s going on.

AND THE ANIMATION?? I WAS SHOCKED. Especially because I didn’t lag or crash, not even once. It adds so much life to the game and makes it feel way more immersive. I honestly wish more VNs did this because it really elevates the experience.

Also, I gotta ask, are there going to be more routes or choices in the future? Because I’d love to explore more of the story, especially with characters like Fen (ESPECIALLY CRYOX. HIS DESIGN IS JUST AHGGGHHH)

Super excited to see where this goes Devs!! You’ve really made something great here!!

Wow, Just wow.  The animation? Like tf 

This is too far good.

Story is insane with details.

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i know this criticism have been called out before but i feel it needs another interation, as it is really important:

This is a military sci-fi VN about trauma, loss, and intergalactic war—so foregrounding body positivity as a core ideal, without contextual anchoring, feels like aesthetic morality slapped on a world where discipline and survival should reign.

I am not mocking body positivity.

I am calling out a misalignment of tone and stakes that I feel.


think of it what you will, but at least take an actual time to think 

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The war is only one part of the story being told.

Before the plague appeared the Finite Galaxy was nearing utopia, and they had reached a place where species of all sorts had come together and formed positive ideals towards sexuality, self, acceptance, among other things.

They are not going to abandon those aspects because of the war, nor should anyone let go of the beauty of their lives even when they fight to protect them.

I am sorry if you think that being able to showcase both in this story doesn't mesh with you, but we won't be removing the core ideals I strive to achieve, and if I fail at doing so, then I shall fail with at least trying.

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A world “nearing utopia” means nothing if it folds under narrative pressure. You claim they won’t abandon their values during war — but where is that tested? Where is the cost?

If the ideals survive without friction, that’s not hope — it’s insulation. And if body positivity is presented as an untouched truth while death and trauma gut everything else, that’s not healing —that’s moral tourism.

War stories don’t need to erase softness. But they do need to ground it. Beauty matters because of the horror, not in spite of it. 

If your utopia survives, show me how it bleeds, and if it doesn’t — it’s not utopia. It’s a delusion with good lighting and cute furry sprites.

And, please, don’t defend tone misalignment as moral purity, when it’s just aesthetic inertia. If your world can hold both slaughter and self-love, then show the friction, not a Pinterest board stapled to a battlefield. Own the clash or get out of the genre.


P.S. 

Star Trek: TNG — one of the most optimistic visions of the future — never lets its ideals go untested. Every utopian principle was stress-tested against diplomacy, trauma, loss, and ethical contradiction. That’s what made the hope earnest, not ornamental. Maybe you should take notes.


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> I strive to achieve, and if I fail at doing so, then I shall fail with at least trying.

“Failing while trying” isn’t nobility. It’s evasion.

You’re not under attack for having ideals. You’re being asked whether those ideals fit the world you’ve built. You say the war is just one part—but the stakes shape every part. 

Trying doesn’t excuse misalignment. Effort isn’t immunity.

This isn’t about whether your ideals are beautiful. It’s about whether your story earns them.

If you fail without facing that, then you’re not failing by trying.

You’re failing by refusing to listen — while an untrained echo chamber flatters your ego instead of asking the real question:

Are you actually failing yourself?

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You're asking whether the ideals fit the world—but why demand this answer now, when the story is still unfolding? Instead of questioning if these values hold up, the real intrigue comes from exploring how they do, which is something that develops as the narrative progresses. Right now, the foundation is being laid, and patience is key to seeing how everything takes shape. The kind of scrutiny you're applying makes more sense for a finished story, where all elements have been stress-tested and fully realized.

If your goal is to contribute meaningfully, focus on being constructive rather than critical for the sake of it. A creator needs space to refine their vision—picking apart their work too early can stifle creativity rather than encourage growth. Premature harshness doesn’t lead to depth; it leads to doubt. Some storytellers stop creating altogether when they feel their work is being dismantled before it has even had the chance to breathe. Thoughtful critique should help shape a narrative, not shut it down before it finds its footing.

And for the record, this story is fantastic so far—Xaria has had me laughing nonstop, and I'm eager to see what comes next!

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You’re confusing pressure with sabotage. I’m not asking for a final judgment — I’m pointing out a tonal fracture in the premise.

If a story hinges on values surviving trauma, then the starting point needs to reflect the weight of that survival. Right now, it reads like utopia cosplay skimming over stakes — and that’s a valid warning signal, not a hit piece.

You say critique should wait. I say that is cowardice wrapped in concern. If your vision can’t handle early tension, it’s not visionary — it’s brittle.

Creators don’t grow through echo chambers. They grow when someone says, “This doesn’t land—yet.” Calling that premature is just a polite muzzle.

You don’t protect art by shielding it from friction. You protect it by helping it earn the praise you’re throwing around like confetti.


p.s. Xaria *is* a hot mom — thats not even an argument — but, unfortunately, she doesn’t exist in a vacuum. She isn’t a chatbot. She isn’t a drawing from a deviantart — she is a character within the story.

"Maybe you should take notes" "Are you actually failing yourself" Its a free game dude, the authors putting time and effort for no cost what so ever. If you dont like it, dont read it, but how could you say such things to somebody trying their best at a passion project? Have some shame

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Free doesn’t mean immune. Effort doesn’t mean exempt.

You think “trying your best” shields from critique? Because that’s toddler logic with a Patreon account.

If you can’t handle pushback, maybe you’re the one of the contributers to the project’s moral falling.

Spare me the guilt bait.

Are you subscribed to their Patreon? And if you think what you’re saying is critique you seriously need help, your essays you send are 90% straight  insults. At this point write your own story dawg, you clearly have the time for it

Help I'm unhealthy addicted to this VN 😭

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cough cough...

a week is acc crazy XD

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Oh man, I can't wait to see how this continues

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Just got to the nightclub part and as an enjoyer of both EDM/elctronicy type music and metal i NEED to know the name of the song cuz omg it is sooo fucking good, i love the way it mixed the slow melodic vocals and electronic instrumental of your average EDM song with the fast paced drums and guitar and loud screaming metal vocals, it lowkey reminds me of some of the songs in Cyberpunk 2077 and has that perfect futuristic vibe, anyways sorry for the long ass pragraph of me rambling lmao

Edit: just finished the chapter and the cliff hanger is immaculate when bro said "i know what happened, we need to talk" I'm not even lying when I say my heart dropped all the way down to my balls and when I clicked after readying my self for the incoming existential dread, BOOM HERES THE CREDITS FUCK FACE soo uhh yah 10/10 5 stars would get analy pounded by a wolf with the personality of an anal gland in the middle of a battlefield next to the corpse of a horror beyond my comprehension again 

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Thank you so much. The song is called Eclipse and was made by our amazing HyenaBlood. It is uploaded to our youtube channel 

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Is it possible that there could be a spotify release in the future?

Another chapter will be out soon ?🥺

Just finished reading, I LOVE IT!!! THIS IS THE FIRST VN WITH ACTUAL ANIMATION!!! I'm looking forward to the next build! Also, that cliffhanger is crazy bro...

I know how great it is to end on a cliffhanger as a writer but GOD DAMMIT DID Y'ALL REALLY HAVE TO DO THAT TO ME!?


The new BGs were aces, I saw a maned wolf in one of them which brought me joy. Love me leggy lads.

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This game is really great. At first, when browsing the itch interface, I was not very interested due to the style preference. But I have to apologize for this after playing, this is definitely one of my favorite FVNS. Whether it is the theme of interstellar war or the delicate expression of emotion, I am deeply attracted. The most intuitive expression is my feelings about Brut. At first I really didn't like the character Brut, even hated it (although I have a clear canine preference). But after my first combat tour, I started to like Brut a little bit. I think it's very rare (at least in the FVN world) to be able to make an impression of a virtual character so deep and naturally change people's perceptions of him. But when it came to my first combat mission, Corwan's rescue of Brut really surprised me. Although I did not understand it at first, I felt that I understood a lot after thinking about it. I really appreciate your creativity and creative ability. The only regret is that there is no Chinese translation, and many of the more professional descriptions are not very understandable. I hope that if someone is willing to provide Chinese translation, the author can pay attention to whether the translation is authorized.

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AAAAAAaaaaaaaah...... OH MY DAWG, that was greatI
Now I cannot wait for the next build, the excitement is hanging!!!
Thanks for all the hard work y'all put in to this VN! 

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Yo I'm glad yall uploaded ecilpse to youtube! After hearing it in game i wanted to listen to it more. Honestly the music has been really solid in the VN overall.

absolutely LOVE Brut's characterization over the last two builds, you guys are cooking hard

Deciding to call it now that Brut will be the first named character to die.

No please no 😭 😭

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My Call is Eryx/Gladius. I like him so much, but he and Zaria got all the Death-flags in place...

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HOW DARE YOU END THIS BUILD WITH THIS

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I'm a Brazilian fan of the game and I have to say that I always look forward to new updates, I love space-themed VNs and this is one of the best if not the best I've ever found, I'm just sad that the update always ends at a time when there will be movement in the story, but please keep up the incredible work you do.

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Just read Build 6.

I do not, nor will I ever, understand why all my favourite pieces of media have recently all been ending in FUCKING. CLIFFHANGERS.  *ahem* Here's to the naive hope that this will be done sparsely moving forward. All that aside...

This was an absolutely beautiful build and was completely worth the wait, however painful it was, and I am already very very eagerly awaiting the next build. The backgrounds in particular were really stunning and I hope to see more going forward.

I'mma go read that a few more time now

hi so i just downloaded build 6 yet there is no updates added is there something wrong with the files?

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The update is not out yet, that post was informing us about the changes they made and that it'll release this weekend

ohhh sorry im so stupid i didnt really read correctly my bad :]

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Hello, since you published build 6, i downloded it, but it seems that you haven't updated the files yet, because as you can see it's still build 1.5.4 and even when I updated the VN, nothing changed at all. Please renew the files, I've been waiting for so long.

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uhm I don't think they published it yet. Well, not publicly, that is.😅 The newest post they made was just saying it would be out this weekend, not that it *is* out. It'll prob only be out late tmrw, or even Monday maybe🥲


Edit: I'VE NEVER BEEN SO GLAD TO BE WRONG IT'S OUT LET'S FUCKIN' GOOOOOOOOOO

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Just found this VN the other day, and I'm so glad that I did - it's always a real treat to find a story with this level of quality, care, and skill put into it. 

There's so many things I want to praise - the natural, subtle, and expansive worldbuilding that keeps me asking questions and wanting to see more; the bright and colorful character writing that makes me want to spend time with and learn about each and every one of them, even ones like Brut and Fen; the powerful and delicate emotions, traumas, and anxieties that bleed through interactions and hang over the people who chose to put themselves in this situation; Cyrox the Mawful anytime he's on screen;  the incredible and expressive art, ESPECIALLY in chapter 5 with the combat sprites and the incredible animation (can't wait to see the finished CGs!); the MC as a distinct, driven, and interesting character in their own right; the surprising funny and hot other scene in Chapter 5 that was such a delightfully complex whirlwind of emotions; and much more. 

You've all done incredible work, and I hope you're proud of what you've created so far. I can't wait for Chapter 6 this weekend, and will continue to eagerly watch and support this project through development! Thanks so much for creating this art and sharing it with the community!

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While I am more of a fan of route based games (Jeaz, my beloved, I soooo would've gone for your route if you had one), the story is engaging on its own merits. Speaking of Jeaz though, I think they tend to be referred to using they/them pronouns, is that NB representation?  (Also, can we please fuck Jeaz? Second choice is Alex, but that one's basically guaranteed from the description and Alex being pretty clearly main cast.) Great work!

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Jeaz is NB yes, and you can spend time with them at some point in the story yes.

I loved playing this vn. The artstyle is crazy beautiful and adore the characters. Can't wait for the next update release in a few days.

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Oh man just tried today and  i can really tell the effort you guys put into this. Really really enjoyed it, especially naughty part that threw me off lmao

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BUG  BREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEACH!!!!

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ngl, I was hype to have this story, and sex, but honestly the way it happened, man, kinda bummed out, not a fan of tactical sex, I was expecting barracks sex, I still like and I'm gonna stay for the story and maybe some sex that throws me out of the story less, but yeah, either way still great game

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not a fan of  WHAT NOW

tacsex

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What happens in the trenches, stays in the trenches.

Acabo de terminar lo que hay por ahora y WOW, es magnífico, un trabajo espléndido y muy recomendable, amé a nuestro caballero quiero saber más sobre TODOS los personajes y la trama es muy buena aaaaaaaa

WOW this vn surpassed my expectations on multiple levels--the plot is unique and really well written.

Our knight is sooo handsome, hope we get a romantic path with him 

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The plot is great, but it ruined in chapter 5 because of MC's strategy to save him... I hope there is explanation about this in next chapter. It just that scene is not necessary yet. But still the CG, character, BG, music are immaculate.

Sex releases Endorphine. Endorphine reduce pain.

The only thing missing is a clear statement that Brute was in such a pain that even painkillers aren't sufficient enough to save his Life.

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now that was a chapter i enjoyed .can't wait for more 




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That conversation of Fen and Brut, along with the MC and Brut afterwards having the love hate boners for each other...I am living for it.

Also give me that Alex x MC ,we see that cat wanting MC to themselves and I'm all for it

after the animation the scene that takes place is it unfinished or is it meant to be with no color and basically just looks like a sketch

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We will be adding the final animation scenes once completed.

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omg just played and that ANIMATED SCENE was so good i haven't really seen animated scene like that in a vns it was really great keep up the good work I'm in shock.

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i am fangirling so hard rate now i freaking love the animation, i can't even imagine the work that went into this scene. it takes such a heavy moment and really eleavates it to something you'd only see in a highclass movie. its unbelievable 

just asking to make sure its not savable, but are the old saves not compatible with the newest update?

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Unfortunately sometimes with Renpy when we do some work on the engine it can make the saves incompatible. I do apologise but there is a chapter select option so you can jump into the story at the right points.

LOVED the new update. I was surprised to see that it updated and instantly downloaded the new build. In Finite Space never stops to impress me with everything it is. Keep up the good work! Loving this FVN!!!

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question: who will  we  be able to romance with ?

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From desc: "We hope to show a story that breaks a few FVN traditions and give people a story that, while linear, offers choices to engage in 'stress relief' with any and all of the main cast. You choose if you want to take part."

Guessing romance the wolf and bang anyone else that's considered "main" cast. Probably the 5 or so squadmates, but i wouldn't be surprised if there's more options

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DAMN

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When the crew first land to fight off the plauge and we find Xaria to help with the drill stuff. I laughed my ass off when i heard the drill noises cause it sounds like someone just let one rip and it lasted a while instead of it sounding like a drill noise. Who ate taco bell and beans and forgot to go to the toilet?

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TYPE W FOR THE UPDATE

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whew i wasn't expecting that to happen at the end of the build, I enjoyed that thoroughly and I'm defiantly gonna stick around to see how the rest of the story goes



and to see if the dynamic of a certain relationship changes uwu (i cant help the characters i find hot are always jerks XD )

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Probably Calbex only and this is a guess but the main screen is Calbex and the MC lying in the water so it kinda just gives off that vibe

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