I do hope its just an understanding conversation between Calbex and Corwan for why he did it. I can't really see Calbex blowing up at Corwan for it but at the same time it terrifies me that it could happen at some point.
Ok so im a bit confused (idk if its my bad memory) because just before we get deployed to fight off the uhh aliens (forgot the name, i havent read it yet and i JUST started reading the new update) someone states that you gotta stay calm as you and calbex share a link or something? What made me curios about this is when we do the deed with brut does that mean that Calbex felt some arousal when figthign or something?
I was thinking the same thing! idk if youve read till the newest update but it seems that (spoilers*) the two characters are going to talk about it. Really cant wait
I LOVEEEE THIS FVN SOOO MUCHHH. It’s honestly hard to find furry visual novels that hit the spot, this is a rare gem. The plot is unique and well written, the art style is just perfection, and the different designs of the characters and their personalities are just ARGHHH. You can really get attached to these characters, The music is also fucking great, especially that nightclub part. TikTok got me here, but now I’m completely OBSESSED.
Everything just clicks. I never felt bored reading the dialogue, which is saying a lot because some VNs can drag, but this one kept me engaged the whole time. The pacing feels just right, and it really makes you care about what’s going on.
AND THE ANIMATION?? I WAS SHOCKED. Especially because I didn’t lag or crash, not even once. It adds so much life to the game and makes it feel way more immersive. I honestly wish more VNs did this because it really elevates the experience.
Also, I gotta ask, are there going to be more routes or choices in the future? Because I’d love to explore more of the story, especially with characters like Fen (ESPECIALLY CRYOX. HIS DESIGN IS JUST AHGGGHHH)
Super excited to see where this goes Devs!! You’ve really made something great here!!
i know this criticism have been called out before but i feel it needs another interation, as it is really important:
This is a military sci-fi VN about trauma, loss, and intergalactic war—so foregrounding body positivity as a core ideal, without contextual anchoring, feels like aesthetic morality slapped on a world where discipline and survival should reign.
I am not mocking body positivity.
I am calling out a misalignment of tone and stakes that I feel.
think of it what you will, but at least take an actual time to think
Before the plague appeared the Finite Galaxy was nearing utopia, and they had reached a place where species of all sorts had come together and formed positive ideals towards sexuality, self, acceptance, among other things.
They are not going to abandon those aspects because of the war, nor should anyone let go of the beauty of their lives even when they fight to protect them.
I am sorry if you think that being able to showcase both in this story doesn't mesh with you, but we won't be removing the core ideals I strive to achieve, and if I fail at doing so, then I shall fail with at least trying.
A world “nearing utopia” means nothing if it folds under narrative pressure. You claim they won’t abandon their values during war — but where is that tested? Where is the cost?
If the ideals survive without friction, that’s not hope — it’s insulation. And if body positivity is presented as an untouched truth while death and trauma gut everything else, that’s not healing —that’s moral tourism.
War stories don’t need to erase softness. But they do need to ground it. Beauty matters because of the horror, not in spite of it.
If your utopia survives, show me how it bleeds, and if it doesn’t — it’s not utopia. It’s a delusion with good lighting and cute furry sprites.
And, please, don’t defend tone misalignment as moral purity, when it’s just aesthetic inertia. If your world can hold both slaughter and self-love, then show the friction, not a Pinterest board stapled to a battlefield. Own the clash or get out of the genre.
P.S.
Star Trek: TNG — one of the most optimistic visions of the future — never lets its ideals go untested. Every utopian principle was stress-tested against diplomacy, trauma, loss, and ethical contradiction. That’s what made the hope earnest, not ornamental. Maybe you should take notes.
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> I strive to achieve, and if I fail at doing so, then I shall fail with at least trying.
“Failing while trying” isn’t nobility. It’s evasion.
You’re not under attack for having ideals. You’re being asked whether those ideals fit the world you’ve built. You say the war is just one part—but the stakes shape every part.
You're asking whether the ideals fit the world—but why demand this answer now, when the story is still unfolding? Instead of questioning if these values hold up, the real intrigue comes from exploring how they do, which is something that develops as the narrative progresses. Right now, the foundation is being laid, and patience is key to seeing how everything takes shape. The kind of scrutiny you're applying makes more sense for a finished story, where all elements have been stress-tested and fully realized.
If your goal is to contribute meaningfully, focus on being constructive rather than critical for the sake of it. A creator needs space to refine their vision—picking apart their work too early can stifle creativity rather than encourage growth. Premature harshness doesn’t lead to depth; it leads to doubt. Some storytellers stop creating altogether when they feel their work is being dismantled before it has even had the chance to breathe. Thoughtful critique should help shape a narrative, not shut it down before it finds its footing.
And for the record, this story is fantastic so far—Xaria has had me laughing nonstop, and I'm eager to see what comes next!
You’re confusing pressure with sabotage. I’m not asking for a final judgment — I’m pointing out a tonal fracture in the premise.
If a story hinges on values surviving trauma, then the starting point needs to reflect the weight of that survival. Right now, it reads like utopia cosplay skimming over stakes — and that’s a valid warning signal, not a hit piece.
You say critique should wait. I say that is cowardice wrapped in concern. If your vision can’t handle early tension, it’s not visionary — it’s brittle.
Creators don’t grow through echo chambers. They grow when someone says, “This doesn’t land—yet.” Calling that premature is just a polite muzzle.
You don’t protect art by shielding it from friction. You protect it by helping it earn the praise you’re throwing around like confetti.
p.s. Xaria *is* a hot mom — thats not even an argument — but, unfortunately, she doesn’t exist in a vacuum. She isn’t a chatbot. She isn’t a drawing from a deviantart — she is a character within the story.
No one's saying that critique is off-limits because the story is in its early stages. What we're saying is that you need to tone down the attitude.
Being harsh doesn't give you authority, and it doesn't make your points any more valid than the others. Wanting basic respect and open-mindedness in a critique isn't cowardice, it's a reasonable expectation when the goal is to help the story grow. Not every response you receive is an excuse.
"Maybe you should take notes" "Are you actually failing yourself" Its a free game dude, the authors putting time and effort for no cost what so ever. If you dont like it, dont read it, but how could you say such things to somebody trying their best at a passion project? Have some shame
Are you subscribed to their Patreon? And if you think what you’re saying is critique you seriously need help, your essays you send are 90% straight insults. At this point write your own story dawg, you clearly have the time for it
Just got to the nightclub part and as an enjoyer of both EDM/elctronicy type music and metal i NEED to know the name of the song cuz omg it is sooo fucking good, i love the way it mixed the slow melodic vocals and electronic instrumental of your average EDM song with the fast paced drums and guitar and loud screaming metal vocals, it lowkey reminds me of some of the songs in Cyberpunk 2077 and has that perfect futuristic vibe, anyways sorry for the long ass pragraph of me rambling lmao
Edit: just finished the chapter and the cliff hanger is immaculate when bro said "i know what happened, we need to talk" I'm not even lying when I say my heart dropped all the way down to my balls and when I clicked after readying my self for the incoming existential dread, BOOM HERES THE CREDITS FUCK FACE soo uhh yah 10/10 5 stars would get analy pounded by a wolf with the personality of an anal gland in the middle of a battlefield next to the corpse of a horror beyond my comprehension again
Just finished reading, I LOVE IT!!! THIS IS THE FIRST VN WITH ACTUAL ANIMATION!!! I'm looking forward to the next build! Also, that cliffhanger is crazy bro...
This game is really great. At first, when browsing the itch interface, I was not very interested due to the style preference. But I have to apologize for this after playing, this is definitely one of my favorite FVNS. Whether it is the theme of interstellar war or the delicate expression of emotion, I am deeply attracted. The most intuitive expression is my feelings about Brut. At first I really didn't like the character Brut, even hated it (although I have a clear canine preference). But after my first combat tour, I started to like Brut a little bit. I think it's very rare (at least in the FVN world) to be able to make an impression of a virtual character so deep and naturally change people's perceptions of him. But when it came to my first combat mission, Corwan's rescue of Brut really surprised me. Although I did not understand it at first, I felt that I understood a lot after thinking about it. I really appreciate your creativity and creative ability. The only regret is that there is no Chinese translation, and many of the more professional descriptions are not very understandable. I hope that if someone is willing to provide Chinese translation, the author can pay attention to whether the translation is authorized.
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Is any choice gonna affect the ending or just the same?
no choice will ever effect the ending. Choose what you like without fear of missing out on a 'good ending'.
NEW BUILD!! I am Soo happyyy シ
Man that ending now has me in Suspense.
I do hope its just an understanding conversation between Calbex and Corwan for why he did it. I can't really see Calbex blowing up at Corwan for it but at the same time it terrifies me that it could happen at some point.
Thanks IFS team.
Will Calbex be the only love route ?
There are no routes in the game. Who, if anyone, MC ends up with is set in stone. But you can choose to spend some times with any of the main cast.
Thank you for the reply :D I can't wait for Chapter 7 after that cliffhanger
XARIAAAAA❕❕❕❕
Spoilers
Ok so im a bit confused (idk if its my bad memory) because just before we get deployed to fight off the uhh aliens (forgot the name, i havent read it yet and i JUST started reading the new update) someone states that you gotta stay calm as you and calbex share a link or something?
What made me curios about this is when we do the deed with brut does that mean that Calbex felt some arousal when figthign or something?
I was thinking the same thing! idk if youve read till the newest update but it seems that (spoilers*) the two characters are going to talk about it. Really cant wait
I did read it but someone informed calbex about the stuff, he didn’t find out on his own
I LOVEEEE THIS FVN SOOO MUCHHH. It’s honestly hard to find furry visual novels that hit the spot, this is a rare gem. The plot is unique and well written, the art style is just perfection, and the different designs of the characters and their personalities are just ARGHHH. You can really get attached to these characters, The music is also fucking great, especially that nightclub part. TikTok got me here, but now I’m completely OBSESSED.
Everything just clicks. I never felt bored reading the dialogue, which is saying a lot because some VNs can drag, but this one kept me engaged the whole time. The pacing feels just right, and it really makes you care about what’s going on.
AND THE ANIMATION?? I WAS SHOCKED. Especially because I didn’t lag or crash, not even once. It adds so much life to the game and makes it feel way more immersive. I honestly wish more VNs did this because it really elevates the experience.
Also, I gotta ask, are there going to be more routes or choices in the future? Because I’d love to explore more of the story, especially with characters like Fen (ESPECIALLY CRYOX. HIS DESIGN IS JUST AHGGGHHH)
Super excited to see where this goes Devs!! You’ve really made something great here!!
Wow, Just wow. The animation? Like tf
This is too far good.
Story is insane with details.
i know this criticism have been called out before but i feel it needs another interation, as it is really important:
This is a military sci-fi VN about trauma, loss, and intergalactic war—so foregrounding body positivity as a core ideal, without contextual anchoring, feels like aesthetic morality slapped on a world where discipline and survival should reign.
I am not mocking body positivity.
I am calling out a misalignment of tone and stakes that I feel.
think of it what you will, but at least take an actual time to think
The war is only one part of the story being told.
Before the plague appeared the Finite Galaxy was nearing utopia, and they had reached a place where species of all sorts had come together and formed positive ideals towards sexuality, self, acceptance, among other things.
They are not going to abandon those aspects because of the war, nor should anyone let go of the beauty of their lives even when they fight to protect them.
I am sorry if you think that being able to showcase both in this story doesn't mesh with you, but we won't be removing the core ideals I strive to achieve, and if I fail at doing so, then I shall fail with at least trying.
A world “nearing utopia” means nothing if it folds under narrative pressure. You claim they won’t abandon their values during war — but where is that tested? Where is the cost?
If the ideals survive without friction, that’s not hope — it’s insulation. And if body positivity is presented as an untouched truth while death and trauma gut everything else, that’s not healing —that’s moral tourism.
War stories don’t need to erase softness. But they do need to ground it. Beauty matters because of the horror, not in spite of it.
If your utopia survives, show me how it bleeds, and if it doesn’t — it’s not utopia. It’s a delusion with good lighting and cute furry sprites.
And, please, don’t defend tone misalignment as moral purity, when it’s just aesthetic inertia. If your world can hold both slaughter and self-love, then show the friction, not a Pinterest board stapled to a battlefield. Own the clash or get out of the genre.
P.S.
Star Trek: TNG — one of the most optimistic visions of the future — never lets its ideals go untested. Every utopian principle was stress-tested against diplomacy, trauma, loss, and ethical contradiction. That’s what made the hope earnest, not ornamental. Maybe you should take notes.
edit:
> I strive to achieve, and if I fail at doing so, then I shall fail with at least trying.
“Failing while trying” isn’t nobility. It’s evasion.
You’re not under attack for having ideals. You’re being asked whether those ideals fit the world you’ve built. You say the war is just one part—but the stakes shape every part.
Trying doesn’t excuse misalignment. Effort isn’t immunity.
This isn’t about whether your ideals are beautiful. It’s about whether your story earns them.
If you fail without facing that, then you’re not failing by trying.
You’re failing by refusing to listen — while an untrained echo chamber flatters your ego instead of asking the real question:
Are you actually failing yourself?
You're asking whether the ideals fit the world—but why demand this answer now, when the story is still unfolding? Instead of questioning if these values hold up, the real intrigue comes from exploring how they do, which is something that develops as the narrative progresses. Right now, the foundation is being laid, and patience is key to seeing how everything takes shape. The kind of scrutiny you're applying makes more sense for a finished story, where all elements have been stress-tested and fully realized.
If your goal is to contribute meaningfully, focus on being constructive rather than critical for the sake of it. A creator needs space to refine their vision—picking apart their work too early can stifle creativity rather than encourage growth. Premature harshness doesn’t lead to depth; it leads to doubt. Some storytellers stop creating altogether when they feel their work is being dismantled before it has even had the chance to breathe. Thoughtful critique should help shape a narrative, not shut it down before it finds its footing.
And for the record, this story is fantastic so far—Xaria has had me laughing nonstop, and I'm eager to see what comes next!
You’re confusing pressure with sabotage. I’m not asking for a final judgment — I’m pointing out a tonal fracture in the premise.
If a story hinges on values surviving trauma, then the starting point needs to reflect the weight of that survival. Right now, it reads like utopia cosplay skimming over stakes — and that’s a valid warning signal, not a hit piece.
You say critique should wait. I say that is cowardice wrapped in concern. If your vision can’t handle early tension, it’s not visionary — it’s brittle.
Creators don’t grow through echo chambers. They grow when someone says, “This doesn’t land—yet.” Calling that premature is just a polite muzzle.
You don’t protect art by shielding it from friction. You protect it by helping it earn the praise you’re throwing around like confetti.
p.s. Xaria *is* a hot mom — thats not even an argument — but, unfortunately, she doesn’t exist in a vacuum. She isn’t a chatbot. She isn’t a drawing from a deviantart — she is a character within the story.
No one's saying that critique is off-limits because the story is in its early stages. What we're saying is that you need to tone down the attitude.
Being harsh doesn't give you authority, and it doesn't make your points any more valid than the others. Wanting basic respect and open-mindedness in a critique isn't cowardice, it's a reasonable expectation when the goal is to help the story grow. Not every response you receive is an excuse.
"Maybe you should take notes" "Are you actually failing yourself" Its a free game dude, the authors putting time and effort for no cost what so ever. If you dont like it, dont read it, but how could you say such things to somebody trying their best at a passion project? Have some shame
Free doesn’t mean immune. Effort doesn’t mean exempt.
You think “trying your best” shields from critique? Because that’s toddler logic with a Patreon account.
If you can’t handle pushback, maybe you’re the one of the contributers to the project’s moral falling.
Spare me the guilt bait.
Are you subscribed to their Patreon? And if you think what you’re saying is critique you seriously need help, your essays you send are 90% straight insults. At this point write your own story dawg, you clearly have the time for it
Help I'm unhealthy addicted to this VN 😭
cough cough...
a week is acc crazy XD
Oh man, I can't wait to see how this continues
Just got to the nightclub part and as an enjoyer of both EDM/elctronicy type music and metal i NEED to know the name of the song cuz omg it is sooo fucking good, i love the way it mixed the slow melodic vocals and electronic instrumental of your average EDM song with the fast paced drums and guitar and loud screaming metal vocals, it lowkey reminds me of some of the songs in Cyberpunk 2077 and has that perfect futuristic vibe, anyways sorry for the long ass pragraph of me rambling lmao
Edit: just finished the chapter and the cliff hanger is immaculate when bro said "i know what happened, we need to talk" I'm not even lying when I say my heart dropped all the way down to my balls and when I clicked after readying my self for the incoming existential dread, BOOM HERES THE CREDITS FUCK FACE soo uhh yah 10/10 5 stars would get analy pounded by a wolf with the personality of an anal gland in the middle of a battlefield next to the corpse of a horror beyond my comprehension again
Thank you so much. The song is called Eclipse and was made by our amazing HyenaBlood. It is uploaded to our youtube channel
Is it possible that there could be a spotify release in the future?
Another chapter will be out soon ?🥺
Just finished reading, I LOVE IT!!! THIS IS THE FIRST VN WITH ACTUAL ANIMATION!!! I'm looking forward to the next build! Also, that cliffhanger is crazy bro...
I know how great it is to end on a cliffhanger as a writer but GOD DAMMIT DID Y'ALL REALLY HAVE TO DO THAT TO ME!?
The new BGs were aces, I saw a maned wolf in one of them which brought me joy. Love me leggy lads.
This game is really great. At first, when browsing the itch interface, I was not very interested due to the style preference. But I have to apologize for this after playing, this is definitely one of my favorite FVNS. Whether it is the theme of interstellar war or the delicate expression of emotion, I am deeply attracted. The most intuitive expression is my feelings about Brut. At first I really didn't like the character Brut, even hated it (although I have a clear canine preference). But after my first combat tour, I started to like Brut a little bit. I think it's very rare (at least in the FVN world) to be able to make an impression of a virtual character so deep and naturally change people's perceptions of him. But when it came to my first combat mission, Corwan's rescue of Brut really surprised me. Although I did not understand it at first, I felt that I understood a lot after thinking about it. I really appreciate your creativity and creative ability. The only regret is that there is no Chinese translation, and many of the more professional descriptions are not very understandable. I hope that if someone is willing to provide Chinese translation, the author can pay attention to whether the translation is authorized.